牛津大学招生处负责人卡翠娜(caitrionawoolhouse)也提出了同样的观点，“当学生要申请顶尖大学的时候，尤其是类似于牛津大学这类的名校，我们希望学生能表现出的是至少75%至80%的优势都体现在学术知识方面，另外20%至25%的优势是在于课外活动的经验方面。课外活动，包括工作经历，也必须是与面试者所申请所读专业相关的。”

4、申请文书切忌过分夸大个人能力及成绩。

5、申请文书论证及检查的重要性

学生必须想清楚申请院校及专业的目的`，并在文书中表达出对所学专业的优点及能力，必须让学校清楚的认识到学生对所申请专业的热情及潜力。

ucas系统负责人法图玛(fatumamahad)也强调了这一重要性。“让你的朋友同学及家长阅读你的文书，他们也许可以为你提供合适的建议及看法。学生也可以试着将文书内容朗读出来，这样有助于让学生发现文书中的语言及表达错误。”

6、最后一点关键性的建议是，学生一定要保持诚信的态度，切忌抄袭他人的文书内容，抄袭检查系统将会很智能的检查到任何作弊及抄袭行为。另外，学生在文书写作中，一定要明确观点及论据，要展示出申请者为何具备成功完成学业的能力，而并不仅仅是陈述出学生有多么渴望申请所学的课程，能力是非常重要的一点。

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respectful sir or madam:

i‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. i’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. that‘s really goodnews for me. and i am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway i want to apply for a scholarship. my name is haoyu liu. i’m 17 years oldand i‘m a fresh man in taiyuan no.2 foreign language high school. i’m very proudof as one of my school. i‘m diligent and i know i must be a useful person. so ialways tell myself that i have to learn more and more. i’m also very outgoingand i like to help people as possible as i can. that‘s way i got many friends. iwas born in jixian，a small county with poor land and terrible weather. myparents were farming at home. even life doesn’t easy，i still hopeful enough. istill love my hometown and i want to do something for my country. so i want tolearn more knowledge as possible as i can. i know how hard people‘s life. so iwant to change it by myself. that’s way i‘m diligent and i like to help people.but when i went to high school，our life got worst. my parents can’t afford mytuition. so my father went to taiyuan to find a job. and we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown.

but i still keep my faith，because i know that my family will support me tolet my dream come true forever. when i got the information that i can be anexchange student，i was exciting but confusing. i really want to go to german tostudy but i don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. so i’m writing thisletter to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. i wish i can do betterjust because i have a dream that i can change my family，my hometown even mycountry. i hope i can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. atschool，i‘m a good student. i’m interested about sports，arts and science. ialso like to study foreign language. that‘s way i chose to study german andenglish at school. i noticed that language can let me communicate with otherseasily. but i can’t only study language. i have to know about the germanicculture clearly. that‘s way i need to be an exchange student this time. but ineed your trust. i need a scholarship of your school，because i’m a goodstudent. i have a dream. in that dream，i can see my parents are smiling becausei became a useful person. i can see my teachers are smiling when i came backfrom german. my will is strong. and i know i can do better when i go to german.so i‘m writing to you to apply a scholarship. and i’m waiting for your return.thank you for your kind heart and reading my letter.

best wishes.

yours,

li ming

申请留学申请书篇3

dear xx,

it is an apparent truth that, in modern technology-dominated and highlycompetitive society, the kind of people who will be most highly appreciated arethose who command central business regulations and legal rules，grasp advancedtechnology ahead of others and apply it to productive utilization, and possessoutstanding management talents and interpersonal communication skills. although,with the alarmingly rapid integration of global economy and the dramatic changesof technological advances, competitions among management talents are alsobecoming increasingly fierce, the professional with the aforesaid combination oftalents will ultimately prevail, and are bound to become the most sought-afterpeople on the job market. as a person who has achieved moderate successes inmarket competitions, i have made a seemingly abrupt and incomprehensivedecision—to suspend my booming career in favor of an application for admissioninto the management science and engineering program at your prestigiousuniversity. however, the motivation behind this present application issufficiently simple—to develop myself through your program into a well-trainedprofessional with that special combination of talents, with a strong academicbackground, who can stand up to the challenges of tomorrow.

my confidence in my potential is derived from the outstanding performancethat i have produced over the past few years in my business activities. upongraduation from the xx institute of light industry in , i, despite myundergraduate specialization in leather engineering, chose the employment withthe xx international trade company in an effort to satisfy my interest inbusiness and management. from working as sales representative to sales managerof the company, i carried out important responsibilities and made importantachievements. i was responsible for marketing computer accessories and networkequipment in the three provinces which constitute the entire northeastern partof china. i was also in charge of selling xx automobiles and my annual salesvolume reached an average of 50 million rmb. then in 20xx, i switched to work atchina xx information technology corporation, one of the top 100 electronicenterprises in china, where i participated in the implementation of more than adozen projects, including several major projects such as the project ofrenovating the large screens in the xx at the worth of 10 million rmb. myequally outstanding performance in those projects won high evaluations from myimmediate superior.

my ability to carry out effective study and research as demonstrated in mypast academic career is sufficient to convince me of my adaptability to a newacademic environment and to a rigorous curriculum. as a child from a onceimpoverished farm family, it is all too natural for me to have experienced anacademic pursuit replete with hardships and challenges. it is exactly thisdirect experience and deep insight into the difficult conditions of humanexistence that resulted in my sustained diligent efforts at my coursework, hencemy consistently distinguished academic performance. in the local best middle andhigh school, i was ranked first, participating in national physics andmathematics competitions and city-level english contests and winning goodresults. i self-studied the college courses of mathematic analysis and advancedmathematics, and took up english and japanese as my first and second foreignlanguages. the xx institute of light industry which i subsequently entered isone of the key colleges of china and i handled all my coursework with muchfacility. among a wide variety of specialized courses, i liked advancedmathematics, physical chemistry and principles of chemical engineering most, andmy self-education focused on linear algebra, probability theory, and c programdesign. the study of those abstruse courses was a kind of enjoyment for me, notonly training my ability of logical thinking but also providing me with a soundmathematics foundation. when a sophomore, i was the first in my class to passthe national english proficiency test (band vi). although i had to work hardpart-time in order to cover my younger brother’s and my own tuition, i did notallow my part-time jobs to interfere with my proper academic work, achievingvery satisfactory results in almost all the courses. my score for mathematicswas the highest in the class and i was awarded third-class scholarship.

even during my undergraduate career, i had tried to gain some managementskills. in the second year, i was made responsible for the management, logisticsand personnel recruitment of the students part-time store invested by theinstitute itself. in the third year i took part in the training sponsored by thexx company regarding advanced process of leather treatment and productutilization. i was also very active in extracurricular events, launching studentorganizations such as the departmental chess association and calligraphyassociation. those activities helped me improve the precious ability incommunication, coordination and negotiation and profoundly realize theimportance of teamwork. my undergraduate thesis is my first major adventure intothe realm of management. entitled the overall design of a leather chemicalengineering plant and its leather chemical engineering, my thesis was designedto change the then prevalent trend of leather treatment dominated by manuallabor which fell far short of optimum resource allocation and utilization. icreatively modeled my design on the advanced technological processes of xxxandother foreign companies. the large-scale leather chemical engineering plant thati designed preserved traditional processes while featuring advanced equipment,more rationalized processes and resource allocation. when applied to severalplants, my design helped reduced costs by 20 percent and my thesis was rated“first-class.”

based on my rich work experience and sound learning capacity, i haveformulated a tentative study plan for my proposed program. i will firstconsolidate my theoretical foundation, learning basic courses in engineeringeconomy、management of technology ventures、information science while graspingknowledge in finance, information application system, supply management,decision making and policy making. at the same time, i will try to applyadvanced theories and skills to practice and gain a deep understanding ofwestern management concepts and experiences. i will also pay due attention tochina’s developments in the relevant fields and explore how to best apply myknowledge to solve realistic problems in china. my ultimate objective is tobecome a person with knowledge of several different languages, laws in relevantcountries, equipped with advanced management concepts and skills, and able tokeep pace with global technological development. i believe that the educationallevel and the faculty resource of your university can help me fulfill myaspirations.

my objective is set and my preparations are made. i cannot help feelingexcited over the prospect of becoming a well-trained management elite. in thisundertaking, i need your academic input and your first-class training to be aleader in tomorrow’s competitive world.

yours sincerely,

申请留学申请书篇4

（1）不要一味套用写作模板

不要一味套用规律的写作模板回答问题。因为这样很容易偏移原来大学文书的主题，而大学审查官也很容易察觉这种写作方式的千篇一律。

（2）利用鲜活的实例

学会利用鲜活的实例，让读者进入你的情境中，增加形象性和趣味性，让大学申请部的老师们可以感觉到申请人的想法。

（3）写出自己的真情实感

依照自己的性格写文书。在阅读无数的文书后，阅卷老师已能分辨什么是诚实与不诚实的作答，可以区分什么是发自内心回答，因而写作时应该让文书有趣，却又不可丧失自我，才能入老师的法眼。

（4）突出个性

对于入学体制不同于中国大学，更加注重学生的个性与特质，或者说更注重学生是否具有未来成功的潜力。所以，一篇把自己个人特色、优势表达得非常出色和到位的文书，就扮演了举足轻重的角色。总之，文书的创作一定要好好的挖掘自己身上的独特优势，这样才能展示出自己最有竞争力的一面。

出国留学的优缺点解读

一、出国留学优点

1、提升自我

这里的自我提升主要讲的是内在提升，与竞争力的提升是相辅相成的。内在提升包括学识、眼界、认知度以及生活能力的提升。

出国留学的第一要义就是学习，不想学习也会有“deadline”催着你拼命的`学习，不然根据国外大学宽进严出的特点，恐怕很难毕业。所以毕业后不知不觉就收获了很多，当然对于真正意愿深造研究的学生来说，学习才是的快乐。

一个国家有其特有的文化积淀和固有的思维方式，想要打破固化的思维，“走出去”是一个最有效的方式。眼界与认知度的改变或提升是一个潜移默化的过程，多深入接触一个国家，才能真正了解其文化风俗。

生活能力的提升不用多说，出国留学，学习上需要独立自主，衣食住行都要靠自己解决，出个国“公主”也得变成“女汉子”。

2、提高竞争力

这里的竞争力针对的是外在收获，比如留学身份、证明、科研成果等等，其实出国之后外语水平的提升就已经比大多数人多出了一项技能，再加上国外几年时间的学习，积累的成果都会为日后工作打下基础。

3、结识新朋友

出国留学会使人不得不走出自己固定的小圈子，放到一个新的大环境里，不安的同时更多的也是挑战，对于擅长人际交往的人来说，出国留学可以提供一个非常好的场所，一个大学里汇聚了世界各地的人，在认识新朋友的同时，也会了解到不同世界的人们不同的世界观。

4、利于移民

先留学后移民，这是出国留学最实际的好处。很多国家对毕业留学生都施行了优惠政策，例如，加拿大留学毕业后可以获得没有职业限制的3年open工签，工作1年后就可以申请移民。

二、出国留学缺点

1、花费高

凡事都有正反两面，出国留学当然并非“处处香”，单是费用这一点，不说它是一项缺点，但也是拦在出国留学道路上的一座金钱大山。并且付出的成本与回报对于有些人来说不一定会成正比，经济条件好并不在意，但中产阶级就要考虑，留学一趟究竟值不值？

2、离家远

距离也是阻碍出国留学的一个问题，尤其对于一些依赖性的人来说，独立能力差，父母担心舍不得。即便出国留学也很难快速适应当地生活，距离远不易沟通，也不能经常回国，但这个问题对于国内在外地上学的人来说也是同样，既然想要锻炼，就要学会坚强独立。

3、孤独感

孤独感分两种，一种是融入不到新环境，交不到新朋友而产生的孤独。另一种即便结识了很多新朋友，但由于生活与思维的差异，不能真正交心，很难融入当地生活，总有一种异国他乡的孤独。

4、毕业难

不论哪国，一般都是“严进严出”，一般大学“宽进严出”，总之文凭不会白拿，想要“混毕业证”，那出国留学实在没必要。就拿大家都觉得“严”的美国来说，美国大学留的作业是要计入成绩的，每天的作业老师也会检查，大考、小考不断，每周学习120小时其实是留学生的日常，当然这是按真正学习的人来算。

20xx年正规出国留学申请书

xx大学的各位领导：

您们好！

首先感谢你们能在百忙之中审阅我的个人留学申请书。

我叫———，是来自——某中学的一名高三的理科生，即将面临高考，我期望透过贵校来实现我在——大学学习的梦想。一向以来，——大学对我都有很大的吸引力，有着悠久的历史，深厚的文化底蕴，丰富的教学资源，良好的学术氛围，强烈的时代气息，——大学历经沧桑，饱经风雨，为祖国培养了许多优秀人才，取得了丰硕的科研成果，并成为我国培养高层次专门人才和发展科学技术的一个重要基地。我十分渴望能在20——年7月拿到贵校的录取通知书，成为贵校的一名学生，成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才。

进入高中以来，我不断为实现这一理想而努力学习文化知识，勤学善思。英语、理化是我的强势科目，英语成绩个性优异。我参加了今年的全国中学生英语创新大赛，并有幸进入复赛，虽然由于种。种原因和最后的大奖擦肩而过，但参加竞赛的这种过程使我的潜力得到了很大的提升。

除了学习成绩优秀以外，我还有多方面的特长，我参加了校园的乐队，业余时间我喜欢拉二胡，学习二胡，不仅仅丰富了我的课余生活，而且升华了我对音乐的见解，在二胡的世界中，有奔腾豪放的《赛马》，有坚定有力，追溯光明的《光明行》，也有悲愤哀怨的《江河水》，我用心参与文体活动。初中时博兴县的才艺表演大赛中获得优秀节目奖。

我不仅仅爱好计算机，在业余时间，我参加了教育部组织的计算机等级考试并取得了一级b证，而且经常用心参与体育锻炼，强健体魄，增强毅力。除此之外，我热情、开朗，乐于助人，阳光、向上，所以高中以来，我年年被评为为"三好学生"。

但是，这些成绩只能代表我的过去，梦在心中，路在脚下，站在人生的十字路口，我选取了——大学，我期望——大学能敞开怀抱，给我带给一个大发展的平台，期望各位领导和老师能理解我的申请，衷心的感谢！

此致

敬礼！

申请人：xx

20xx年xx月xx日

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尊敬的领导：

在导航过程中知道前进的方向会带来有保证的快乐。作为一名生物化学专业的学生，我在五年前开始了我的奥德赛，当时我们班新来了一位年轻有活力的生物老师。他以一种有趣的方式教我们，并与我们很好地沟通。我很喜欢他，对生物科学的知识印象深刻。他打开了我生命中生物学领域的新大门。随着时间的推移，我对自己的目的地越来越确定。虽然导航的轨迹并不总是绝对笔直的，但我相信它会引导我走向我的梦想。

由于我在xx年全国中学生奥林匹克数学竞赛中的优异成绩和我在高中的优异成绩，我有机会考入北京大学或清华大学这两所中国最有名望的大学，免除了入学考试。但如果我抓住机会，我不能选择生物科学作为我的专业。所以我放弃了宝贵的机会，参加了入学考试。我成功并被北京大学生物化学与分子生物学系录取，该系在中国生物科学教育和研究领域名列前茅，培养了包括中国科学院院士在内的众多学者。在大学的前三年，我的课程范围很广，涵盖自然科学和人文科学，不仅侧重于生物科学，还侧重于密切相关的课程。我全身心地投入到学习中，在个人和教授的帮助下，接受了完整、深刻、严格的生物科学训练。打篮球也是我校园生活的重要组成部分。我是北京大学生命科学学院篮球队的活跃成员。作为控球后卫，球队进攻的组织者，我学会了让五名球员在一场比赛中成为一个强大的团队。去年，我们在北京大学杯的三十六支球队中排名第三。这段经历赋予了我强烈的责任感、信心和团队合作精神。

要成为一名成功的科研人员，不仅需要学术潜力，还需要独立的研究能力。学生将通过与学者密切合作培养独立研究的能力。为此，我进入了蛋白质工程与植物遗传工程国家重点实验室，参加了蛋白质结构与功能课题组。现在我与两名研究生合作，其中一名将前往哈佛医学院继续他的研究工作。我们的最终目标是开发出国家863高技术计划支持的新型溶栓药物。(详细请查看research experience。)到这里三个月，我已经能够独立完成许多实验，并在科学工作中获得了认真的态度和合作。

我有一个崇高的梦想，那就是成为一个除了先进的科学和技术知识之外，还具备卓越的实验技能的人。在我看来，宾夕法尼亚州立大学是进行研究生学习的理想场所，这在智力上令人振奋且具有挑战性。我尊重你严谨的科学方法、独创的想法和杰出的成就。我渴望加入一个能发挥自己最大能力的团体，将个人智慧与团体合作相结合，充分发挥团体的效益，实现自己的梦想。药理学系绝对是这种类型。随着生命科学领域的飞速发展，人类对探究生命本身的本质越来越感兴趣，生命研究的每一个伟大成就都必将照亮我们对自己的认识，造福于我们的人民。和整个社会。药理学领域对于服务于上述人类目的具有特别重要的意义。药理学科学家不仅是研咳嗽保更是未来世界的创造者。我认为具有挑战性的药理学是最适合我开始我的研究生学习的领域，这不仅仅是本科学习的继续，而且不仅仅是更多的知识。它的目的是让学生为进入将知识付诸日常使用的职业做好准备。我吨琢鲂纬芍械男藕磐路领域很感兴趣。几位教授的研究给我留下了深刻的印象，包括穆德博士和其他一些教授。获得博士学位后，我计划在国内或国外的机构从事研究工作。我相信这样的职位提供了最大的空间，我可以在其中对科学界做出最热情的奉献。

我相信你们团队的先进课程、杰出的师资和设备最好的实验室将帮助我取得理想的成就。随着转会我看到娱乐，它应该被视为教育的终结。

由于中国的教育主要是为了帮助孩子通过考试，因此普通教师或校长最不关心娱乐。在急于培养以考试成绩衡量的超级孩子的过程中，教育的目的经常被忽视。课程仅限于强制性考试涵盖的科目。很少鼓励学生提出原创想法。在课堂上，师生之间的互动保持在最低限度。老师们争先恐后地给学生堆作业，家长们也是如此。虽然每个人都累得要死，但很少有孩子具备采取主动或解决现实世界问题的能力。现在是引入新方法的时候了。

改变中文课堂的方法之一是利用新的教学技术和媒体。与其他地方一样，中国的学校当局越来越意识到计算机化的重要性，中国许多富裕的学校已经配备了最先进的计算机。但报告称，这些计算机中只有一小部分被充分利用。其他教育技术和媒体的情况也好不到哪里去。他们要么不在学校上课，要么没有充分利用。很少有中国教师掌握了使用这些现代化设施的诀窍或动力。

因此，我在贵校留学，先攻读硕士学位，然后在攻读教学技术和媒体博士学位，你们的现代教育设施的使用无疑是世界上最先进的。从我从你的网站上挑选出来的信息来看，我认为你的学校在这个领域的研究和研究中是x的领导者。我渴望在您杰出教师的经验丰富的指导下学习。我希望，在我完成您课程的高级培训后，我可以成为一名更有效率的中国教师，为所有其他中国教师树立榜样。

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